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Tuesday, December 8, 2009

The Long Weeks

I'm in the middle of a huge deserted land, otherwise known as desert. Let me tell you why.
First of all, I started staring at Longstick 300, I don't know why. I guess he got a little upset because he tried to poke me in the bellybutton.
Something was wrong with his electrical cords in his body, I mean stick, so I didn't die, instead I got teleported.
I must have been here for about 5 weeks. Luckily, I keep an extra copy of all my stuff (including my dog and house) in my belly. I also store half of my food for accidents like this. I had more than enough food and water, so I never died.
I guess I will never stare at any broomstick, ever again. And I suggest than you don't too.
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8 comments:

  1. Harry Potter The Master That BakesDecember 8, 2009 at 2:40 AM

    hhahahahh!!!I better not do that !!! and how awesome to have a computer and internet in the desert??? i miss you Hagrid Ineed your protection against my evil stepbro ...... he must not be named!!! i liked it (=very funny>>>

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  2. Brian's BlogDecember 8, 2009 at 4:53 PM

    I hope you dont really die. I hope you still live and get revenge of that Longstick... GL :)

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  3. AnonymousDecember 9, 2009 at 4:51 PM

    Your introduction captured my attention. I can't see your conclusion. I really like your introduction. Next time make your blogs longer.

    -Suzy

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  4. Snapes blogDecember 9, 2009 at 4:53 PM

    HAHA. You captured my attention. It wasn't confusing and i understood. The part I like is everything is in your bellybutton. Make more stories like this.

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  5. Jk warriorDecember 10, 2009 at 4:46 PM

    FUNNY
    the intro got my attention. I could clearly understand and there is an intro and body, but there is no conclusion.
    I have nothing to suggest
    I like the belly button part

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  6. scottlimDecember 10, 2009 at 4:58 PM

    weak?????? don't u mean week.

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  7. Diary Of a Wimpy BroomstickDecember 11, 2009 at 1:03 AM

    Nice intro. Good job explaining how you got to the desert. Easy to understand. Liked how you kept everything in that belly of yours. Although I don't get how I have electric cords inside my body, er stick...

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  8. Jamie KooDecember 13, 2009 at 4:58 PM

    Your introduction was very good. However, the other paragraphs aren't clear. I think you should make your blogs longer.

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